My beloved, a men, a heart of universe …
If our encounter had come, when you give yourself in my forehead, memorable and etched ’til soul vanished the end of the world. Are you willing to reign within rubble, then I crowned you a vert? It was, a youths who found me early…lovely dandy to tear apart my throne for you. How baseness I bring you dry, whilst I promised meadow eye. Would you drank the mud within my springs? Or taste the dry of my wilting tilth?
Would you sow the seed within my flushed field, nourish me with a dream that one day will grow knight, son and daughter from the womb that touchable earthy pests?
“While I was wandering, set my pace on gravel and thorny, I’m so tired and agony. No one allowed me live as I will ensure the happiness. Since you never fence your as I feared, it will be sorrowful rain, I’ll tricked sprouting springs even I’ll forced the sun to shine just for you. Wasn’t it enough I vow upon the witnesses, any being sacred things? My dear, a universe in my sight … I’ll do all the requirements to glorify you. “
C. Sasmita
your writings are so passionate! this post just pulled me right in! beautiful!
that’s my pleasure you enjoy my writing…. that’s motivate me a lot 🙂
A wonderful write. Very emotional and full of fire.
thank you charles…. I really enjoy to read your daily encouragement! 🙂
beautiful reflections, wow.
😉
yay…. summer, thanks for shining here 🙂
interesting start, keep writing, happy gooseberry day!
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ay… much oblige and thanks a lot for the motivation 🙂
keep it up.
charming work.
you are a special talent, keep it up.
have fun in the rally.
Hello.
I feel your spirit in this poem. Nice ending.
Thanks for sharing & visiting. I appreciate your comments.
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