while admirers present celestial scent of incense and flowers
palms tilted waiting for the holy sparks
that seeps slowly from Thou benevolent
I believe in sunshine
tough illuminate the trapped souls of darkness
I am grateful to the water
that freshener every drought and thirst
I drown myself in the wind
unhesitatingly fill the blank of sinful sithe
and the ground…
will be faithful waiting for the rest of life
sincere is the clue to unite with the unthinkable
a savior when disaster embrace careless mind
fountain of love and warmth to any cold and hatred
wonderful.well written n keep going
thankieesss for the support… Nice to meet you.. 🙂
…I drown myself in the wind…
…like this line…you create vivid imagery with the words you choose…nicely done.
much oblige dasuntoucha…. May God bless you.:)
Love the imagery… I too liked the line ‘I drown myself in the wind…’ Beautiful write.
thank you reflection ….. glad you enjoy that 🙂
a savior when disaster embrace careless mind
fountain of love and warmth to any cold and hatred
love and warmth can overcome everything as long as you have faith in it, beautifully written, thank for joining us at Jingle Poetry, Glad to have you in =)
yaaayyy Riika! thank you for the compliment. My pleasure (^__^)
I am grateful to the water
that freshener every drought and thirst
wow, a breath of fresh air, well done!
🙂
glad you feel refresh Jingle 😀
Your work is very inspiring and so beautiful. You have a wonderful gift